Feedback

From the feedback that i got i now know how to improve my first draft magazine, i need to think about not using so many fonts and keep it simple with just a couple. I also need to add page numbers and change the date so its not an actual date just a monthly issue. I need to think about the colour scheme and make sure that you can see that writing that i am putting by the masthead etc

I got told that i have used Ed Sheeran too much, so i am going to try and use different artists and make my own up

I am not using the picture on the cover and on the contents page i am going to use different ones, so one of my feedback comments was to zoom it out because it was not as effective but i will do that with my final photos. 

Drafting and planning

This is a draft of what i wanted the magazine to look like. I did know for sure which person i was using to model for my supporting act or my main star. I  tried to get an idea in my head on what i wanted it to look like like to make sure that my end result would be better. I did many things different in my final one.~

I have a feedback post towards this as i got feedback back which made me know what i needed to improve on and what i didnt.

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