Evaluation

  Links on presentation

 http://hannahhoganx.blogspot.co.uk/search?updated-max=2013-10-10T09:04:00-07:00&max-results=7&start=28&by-date=false


 http://hannahhoganx.blogspot.co.uk/search?updated-max=2013-11-28T08:37:00-08:00&max-results=7&start=14&by-date=false

Final product

I have changed everything I needed to, to make sure that from when i started blogging with all the drafts that I did, I had all the conventions that were needed to make sure that my magazine looked like a proper magazine. With my first draft a lot was different as now I have more contents pages making sure its realistic and not much negative space on my cover page.

I didn't change my double page spread loads from my draft. All i did was make sure that the colour scheme was matching which is why throughout the magazine i made lilac the colour and not light blue as it goes more well with the four effects i did

Drafting and planning

This was going to be my final magazine however I had to make some improvements on it to make it better.
I did things like adding page numbers on and a url on the front page.
I thought that with the master head 'ARENA' you couldnt really see it so I was thinking of changing the colour.

Feedback

From the feedback that i got i now know how to improve my first draft magazine, i need to think about not using so many fonts and keep it simple with just a couple. I also need to add page numbers and change the date so its not an actual date just a monthly issue. I need to think about the colour scheme and make sure that you can see that writing that i am putting by the masthead etc

I got told that i have used Ed Sheeran too much, so i am going to try and use different artists and make my own up

I am not using the picture on the cover and on the contents page i am going to use different ones, so one of my feedback comments was to zoom it out because it was not as effective but i will do that with my final photos. 

Drafting and planning

This is a draft of what i wanted the magazine to look like. I did know for sure which person i was using to model for my supporting act or my main star. I  tried to get an idea in my head on what i wanted it to look like like to make sure that my end result would be better. I did many things different in my final one.~

I have a feedback post towards this as i got feedback back which made me know what i needed to improve on and what i didnt.

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Feedback

I feel like with the questionnaires that we did about what you would find most likely in a music interview i feel like i have achieved what i needed to do.

I followed this graph making sure that i didn't ask anything that would bore the readers and make them disinterested, so i made sure that the top 5 highest bar graphs are the main questions that got asked.

Organisation

This is my main artist that is going to be the pop star who i have named Eliza Hale on my magazine. These are some photos 3 of the 5 which where took by me. She fits the style i wanted to go for as i have posted on my research with influences like Selena Gomez and Barbara Palvin.

I think using Shannon O'Grady as my model will allow me to reach my target audience of my magazine. She suits the pop / indie look which i am going for.